Sunday, March 5, 2017

The perfect date

Two sweethearts went on a wagon ride.

He poked her belly, she giggled and squealed.

He held his hands out to the neighbor's cat, she meowed to call it over.

He gave her a bashful smile, she blew raspberries.

He pointed to the sky, she said, "Moon!"

He clapped, she clapped.

Then they blew each other a kiss to say goodnight.


  1. This is so sweet. I love the images you wrote about in here.

  2. You have such great imagery! I love it.

  3. The structure of this poem is fabulous! I love how it all comes together in the last line.

  4. When I reread, I notice the he is very different than the she.
    But in the end, they blow each other kissed. Opposites do seem to attract!